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WAVA
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6-08-06 12:59pm (new)
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Matchbook_Romance
Going. Coming.

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The direction is good but the Jesus jokes you made are old. Work on originality and you'll do better.

6-08-06 2:32pm (new)
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lima
FIREBOMB THE ORPHANAGE!

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True, there is nothing original going on here, but its still very funny. Your set-ups are very good indeed.

One slight flaw though. On three occasions you committed the cardinal sin of naming your comic after the punchline. When you think about it, this is a very silly thing to do, as it automatically renders the comic worthless if you've read the punchline before you've even gone to the page where the comic is.

Still, impressive stuff you've got there kid, and if you can work some proper original material out of the jesus character you'll be a god among men. If you pardon the pun.

6-08-06 5:31pm (new)
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