I would really like some critizim I know this comic sucks so I need some pointer do you mind helping me out like what I could have done to improve my comic

I Really need New Stuff by yipper 9-12-06

and (saying something really boring) and as I stare at this gay gay gay man I wonder to myself is he about to F me in the butt excuse me I said ARE YOU GOINNG TO F ME IN THE B UTT Look for the last time I'm not gay

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If u don't like it I don't care I'm gonna keep making them So go choke on a salty dog turd

Make them funnier.

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

seeI had some really good ones but the more I go along I can't think of any so I've been posting crap after crap

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like this one

What Time it Is

Nelson was in for a big Surprise I am here for Tim the Tool man taylor

by yipper, 8-17-06

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The 1st one needs a twist ending. Like the blonde guy should be saying, "please?" Or "but I brought a strap on." Or "but I could use the $3."

The second one should feature Death asking whatsisname for advice just like Tim always does. You can proceed from there to some funny crap or other. Like maybe Death's wife is going through menopause and is being a real bitch. I don't know. Put butts in it and it will be funny.

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The 1st one needs a twist ending. Like the blonde guy should be saying, "please?" Or "but I brought a strap on." Or "but I could use the $3."

The second one should feature Death asking whatsisname for advice just like Tim always does. You can proceed from there to some funny crap or other. Like maybe Death's wife is going through menopause and is being a real bitch. I don't know. Put butts in it and it will be funny.

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It's true. I alone just spend a good minute or two laughing.

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I has a flavor!

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I would really like some critizim I know this comic sucks so I need some pointer do you mind helping me out like what I could have done to improve my comic

I Really need New Stuff by yipper 9-12-06

and (saying something really boring) and as I stare at this gay gay gay man I wonder to myself is he about to F me in the butt excuse me I said ARE YOU GOINNG TO F ME IN THE B UTT Look for the last time I'm not gay

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See, just throw buttsecks and race in there, and you got something.

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I would really like some critizim I know this comic sucks so I need some pointer do you mind helping me out like what I could have done to improve my comic

I Really need New Stuff by yipper 9-12-06

and (saying something really boring) and as I stare at this gay gay gay man I wonder to myself is he about to F me in the butt excuse me I said ARE YOU GOINNG TO F ME IN THE B UTT Look for the last time I'm not gay

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New Take by LuckyGuess 9-13-06

Have you been watching the news lately? That war in Lebanon is getting serious. I wonder if this guy is going to stick his penis in my butt. Excuse me? Stick your penis in my butt. If I wasn't gay last time you asked why would I be gay now? You should have caught it by now. Your black immune system can't fight it off.

This is my take on the same comic.

Peruse it. Live it. Love it (or not). A good idea would be to read some of the four and five star user's comics and try messing around with different styles util you find something you like. And keep making comics, even if they suck. Eventually you'll get the hang of it.

Then again, I wouldn't trust anything I say. I'm an
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thanks I need to know how to tie that incase I kill myself really thanks for the adive crabs

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Anytime.