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Lizarddude332
November 25, 2006 4:35 PM

Hey guys I'm new. Check out my first comic.

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fuzzyman
November 25, 2006 5:49 PM

It's a bit surreal. I'm not sure about the narration in the second panel. Who's saying "yes."?

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crackpanther
November 25, 2006 7:15 PM

I agree...keep the positive mental attitude but make the comic just a skosh easier to understand.

 

And by skosh I mean lots.

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lima
November 26, 2006 5:19 AM

Most of your comics are alright. Your set-ups are just about adequate enough to make the jokes work, but the jokes aren't paticularly ground-breaking. Still, enough to summon an un-expected chuckle from somewhere between my nose and my throat.

Good for a first batch though. A lot better than most peoples first few attempts. Make more :)

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User #57378
November 26, 2006 7:13 AM

Are we commenting on the Butch gets hungry one?  I thought it was OK... I was expecting a Bacon-bits tie in.

BTW it think Crackpanther is beaucoup dinky-dao for using the word Skosh.

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crabby
November 26, 2006 10:09 AM

I liked every single one of your comics and hope you continue to make more.

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fuzzyman
November 26, 2006 11:01 AM

"Butch is Hungry" is actually funny.

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Lizarddude332
November 26, 2006 12:27 PM

=D UPDATE! gots some more.

 

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finn34
November 26, 2006 2:18 PM

the narration is a bit unnecessary, but otherwise, you've got the makings of decent comicry.

 

keep slugging away, and maybe reach a little harder for material...

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crabby
November 26, 2006 5:32 PM

I wouldn't reach any harder. You've got it all figuered out yourself.

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AngryAmerican
November 27, 2006 9:30 AM

uniformly unfunny.

advice: try harder

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