--- I am Great. So If I Tell You To Go Kill Yourself With A Meat Cleaver. Do it, or I will Kill You, well if you do it your going to die anyway, but whatever.
It's a bit surreal. I'm not sure about the narration in the second panel. Who's saying "yes."?
--- ...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.
Most of your comics are alright. Your set-ups are just about adequate enough to make the jokes work, but the jokes aren't paticularly ground-breaking. Still, enough to summon an un-expected chuckle from somewhere between my nose and my throat.
Good for a first batch though. A lot better than most peoples first few attempts. Make more :)
--- ...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.
--- I am Great. So If I Tell You To Go Kill Yourself With A Meat Cleaver. Do it, or I will Kill You, well if you do it your going to die anyway, but whatever.