this is my fist comic and i want to know if it's any good

Thanks wizards fan

"I brake for ................................ oh shit no breaks!!!"

hey to get to the comic you have to right click the sing that says click here and click veiw image (sorry ,y bad)

form wizards fan

If you post the URL of your comics they will appear here and be easier for all of us to read. Since you only have two comics I'll give you feedback on them both.

/comics/wizardsfan/375091/

If you reverse the characters and put the black kid where the white kid is, then it flow alot easier and the story would make more sense. You could also probably lose some of those narration boxes.

/comics/wizardsfan/375095/

That is a funny comic.

ps. I'm a big Bullets fan. Keep up the good work.

thanks alot wiz are going all the way in 06

form chris

/comics/wizardsfan/375104/

I thought that was funny in a very obvious, "I know what he's gonna do here" sort of way. Keep searching for what it is that defines you as a comic creator.

this is the best site ever i could do this all day

/comics/wizardsfan/375107/

(i know i need to check my spelling before i finsh making a comic.)

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this is the best site ever i could do this all day

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I've seen many lives ruined by stripcreator. I hope you don't go down the messy road and are able to keep your nose clean and move onto bigger and better things. The sky is the limit for you right now. Reach for the stars.

Abandon hope, all ye who enter here.

This place will suck your soul out of you like a slurpy and piss it into the wind.

Be afraid.  Be VERY afraid.

My soul is in a safety-deposit box. It's safer that way. That's how I've been able to keep from being sucked into the vile debauchery this site offers. That and lots of booze and hookers.

57 posts and 28 comics after being registered for over 2 years shows impressive restraint. Or you're an alias of someone who left. Either way.

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My soul is in a safety-deposit box. It's safer that way. That's how I've been able to keep from being sucked into the vile debauchery this site offers. That and lots of booze and hookers.

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I pad my shirt with charmin ultra before I ever log in. Not Brawny. Brawny has one of those gays on the front. And I don't want any gays in my shirt. Not that I have a problem with gays. I'm not gay or anything. I just don't want them touching me with their rough, manly hands. Their rough, manly, caressing hands.

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57 posts and 28 comics after being registered for over 2 years shows impressive restraint. Or you're an alias of someone who left. Either way.

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That's right. I'm your alias.

gee people are cranky and snippy around here lol

i like the cindarella comic and the world's worst comic, but i agree with crabby that the two guys need to swithc places in the world's worst comic.

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57 posts and 28 comics after being registered for over 2 years shows impressive restraint. Or you're an alias of someone who left. Either way.

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That's right. I'm your alias.

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My aliases are smart enough to not put all of my other aliases in their friends list.

whoa, dont you like, have your name on your friends list a dozen time? i don't get it, does comics and posts and favoriets really mean anything?

so anyway, good comics wizardsfan. i hope you make more.

hrer are my last comcs i have made so far before i go to bed

/comics/wizardsfan/375121/

/comics/wizardsfan/375125/

Great stuff.

/comics/crabby/375153/

in the light of recent events which have made everyone warm and fuzzy towards even the most hopeless noobs, i have decided to be the bad guy and only dole out the praise when i think its deserved or there appears to be some hope for the future.

these comics so far are not praiseworthy, nor do they show much promise.

i smell a minor who should pay more attention in school.

sorry, but i calls em as i sees em. don't let it discourage you wizardsfan, you will always have sports to entertain yourself.

authors note: this was not a mindless attack on a noob, merely an opinion based on the 5 or 6 comics posted here. no tears please.

His comics do fucking suck, but I feel that there is enough non sense there that if he keeps trying he can make good stuff.

I chuckled at two of them, but probably for the weird ideas they put in my head rather than the jokes.

On the whole I don't find them funny at all, but hey, keep 'em coming, you're bound to find something that everyone likes.

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but hey, keep 'em coming

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Or don't.  I'd step back, look at your current work more, and spend more time looking at the toprated list to see what sort of things have worked for other people.  You're too predictable and you seem to be reaching for anything even slightly humorous rather than wait until you find something really good.

Sorry (and I know that somewhere in the last fight here someone attacked people who attack grammar and spelling) but when you spell "viagra" as "virga", and then title a comic "Does Virga Really Work", you cross the line from Irreverently Devoid of Caring About Spelling and go into the territory of Making Comics Harder To Understand Through Ignorance.

Unless you did it on purpose. If so, it's "teh funnay" (as I've said before).

Sorry.

Unless you did it on purpose.

Then, not sorry.

Keep on making comics, wiz.  They will keep getting better and better.

i would but i've been sick

Are you sebra?