What the fuck!!! I'm the real Reaper. Take off that costume
Take yours off
Holy Shit!!!!! Put yours back on dude.
That was the only one of your comics that I found even slightly amusing. I get the feeling that youre just running with whatever comes to mind and not stopping to think "Is this really funny? I mean, really?" Sometimes the first thing to come to mind might seem funny, but most of the time it isn't.
I kindly direct you to these comics, wherein lay the horrible things I put out before I started getting a feel for humor; one day you'll look back on your stuff now like I look on my first comics. If you're just doing this to have fun for yourself, don't bother asking us for input; but if you really want to become better, I suggest looking at what doesn't work in your comics and comparing that to what does work in the comics on the toprated page and/or your favorite strippers here.
--- It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.
It's really all about timing and wording. Experiment with pregnant pauses, being less wordy (less is more), and comedic timing. Sometimes if you make comics from real life experiences you'll find that a comic or series of comics write themselves (my Game Night set, for example).
--- It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.
--- It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.
