Forum archives » Read My Damn Comics » Hey, mind checking them out?

SlappyMcGee
January 7, 2007 12:55 PM

I just started making some yesterday. If you don't like the latest, check "Snap Molasses Antipop" and "Pirates are my HeartThrob".

I'd love to hear some criticism.

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biped
January 7, 2007 2:51 PM

It looks like you were playing around with the characters and backgrounds and having fun with them, but not really seriously trying to be funny.  However, your comics did start getting a bit funnier toward the end of the day, so I predict that once you get settled in, you will start making funnier comics.  One thing, though--please leave off the captions unless they are necessary to the comic, because otherwise they're just a distraction. 

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DaveMonkey
January 9, 2007 6:59 AM

I see where you're going. Keep it up!

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AngryAmerican
January 9, 2007 11:36 AM

it was ok...

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umfumdisi
January 9, 2007 7:15 PM

The early ones were pretty bad, but, yeah, they did get better there near the end. Rise and Fall of Steve and The Doctor was my favorite.

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