I get it... you're waiting for Bil Keane to die so you can steal his market niche.
If ever there was anything we don't need more of...
Having subtly and politely expressed my disgust towards your comics (or comic, since I couldn't get past the one I read), I'll be more constructive and agree that your punchlines need more punch. Your comics are to humor what Budget Gourmet is to a nine-course, five-star dinner.
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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002