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Hm... The writing is there, but the jokes fall through. There were a couple good set-ups, but they didn't quite make it to the end, or you jumped the punch with too many unnecessary words.
These weren't great, but you definitely aren't hopeless. Keep trying.
Also, captions and quotation marks are your enemy.
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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old
