Vroom Vroom by GothicBunny15 3-17-07

You know, I'm gonna get my learner's permit soon. Oh really? Have you studied for the test? Oh, silly cigarette lady, have you not learned from my last comic? Well, you can't get a permit without passing the test. Like a silly test will keep ME from running over all those pedestrians! Go drink motor oil.

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Davan-PeeJee, explain and explain quickly. PeeJee-Well, first I thought, who wanted a candy cane shaped dildo for Christmas? Then I thought, who deserves it?

That comic is all right.  Good set up, but I expected more from the punchline.

You really don't need a separate thread to post each of your comics in, though.  Especially when your comic directly references the comic posted in the other thread.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

I just went back and read your first comic.  That one I liked:

My First Comic Ever by GothicBunny15 3-17-07

If I don't get my shit together, I'm gonna fail. Then why don't you start studying? You know what? You're right! I should start studying every night! That's the ticket! Get yourself in gear! No. I think I'll just wait until this all blows up in my face. I wish you were dead.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Thanks for reading and for the constructive critcism (sp?) I'm new so I wasn't really sure where to put my comics. And yeah, I'm not too good with punchlines yet. Hopefully, I'll get a little better.

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Davan-PeeJee, explain and explain quickly. PeeJee-Well, first I thought, who wanted a candy cane shaped dildo for Christmas? Then I thought, who deserves it?

A Really Stupid Comic by GothicBunny15 3-18-07

Hey Jesus, you know everything, right? Yes, My Child. Is there something you wanted to know? Does being nailed to a cross really hurt that bad? Or are you just being a pussy? ............ Some people just can't take a joke...

Just posted a new one. I kinda hate it but....whatever.

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Davan-PeeJee, explain and explain quickly. PeeJee-Well, first I thought, who wanted a candy cane shaped dildo for Christmas? Then I thought, who deserves it?

Wow, you just started and you already have four stars!  :0

I really like your comics, please keep them coming!  :D

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Penguins are taking over the universe. Just ask Stuper Dan! SD: ? Yes. That's right. He's knows SO much about it he's clueless!

We Are Rebels by GothicBunny15 3-18-07

I'm such a rebel! I don't listen to what anyone says! I'm gonna go smoke some pot! I guess you are a rebel. Because, you know, nobody smokes pot but you. Well...I'm also gonna listen to rap music and disprespect my teachers! You and how many other "rebels" are doing this? Hey! Fuck you! My pants show way more of my ass than any other guys' pants! Bad mental image. Baaaaad mental image.

Hot of the griddle, another worthless comic!

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Davan-PeeJee, explain and explain quickly. PeeJee-Well, first I thought, who wanted a candy cane shaped dildo for Christmas? Then I thought, who deserves it?

that is very interesting

please tell me more

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xx( o Y o. )xx

Your comics are good.  Yay.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

I don't like your screen name. I also thought your comics were presentable and diligent.

Great job!

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You don't know what I got... .

I'd say something like "These comics are akin to eating a warm piece of toast," but "I like them" will suffice.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

I don't know what it is that makes people good at comics, but I think you have an abnormally large supply of it.

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The tongue licking the ars of pretension.

It's A Small World After All by GothicBunny15 3-19-07

You know, I think I might wanna work at Disney World when I'm older. That's so sweet! You must really love children, don't you? ............ ............. HAHAHAHA!!!! Those poor fuckers will never look at Peter Pan the same way again! If I aim right, I could crush her throat right now....

Thank you all very much for the encouragement! Here's another comic!

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Davan-PeeJee, explain and explain quickly. PeeJee-Well, first I thought, who wanted a candy cane shaped dildo for Christmas? Then I thought, who deserves it?

sigh.

 i was going to say something mean but i just don't have the energy.

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Kill Whitey.

AngryAmerican

More!  :D

I ish addicted.  Like really...

You sure your comics aren't made from marijuana?

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Penguins are taking over the universe. Just ask Stuper Dan! SD: ? Yes. That's right. He's knows SO much about it he's clueless!

That last one I didn't enjoy so much.

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The tongue licking the ars of pretension.

They're alright. They didn't offend me at least.

A few of them are clever and/or interesting, but without much of a punchline.

As far as first batches of comics go though, two thumbs up my ass.

I think you're working on some funny ideas, but they seem to sort of fall flat at the end. I think a turn off for me is the cigarette saying nonsensical things in the last frame of the comic. I find them distracting, and I think, for me at least, the comics would be funnier if it weren't saying anything.

Keep up the good work!

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100 pounds of shit in a 25 pound sack.

OR IF THE CIGARETTE OPENS THE GATE TO THE MOUNTAINS OF MADNESS and like James Earl Jones is up there sitting and eating a delicious sandwich.

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possible savior probable SEX MACHINE