Just stumbled on this site yesterday and found some funny stuff.

I posted a few strips of my own and I'm looking for some criticism and ridicule. Can you help?

I thought this was okay. It's not great, but I think you have some potential. Just try not to go for obvious jokes, and don't overuse dialogue. Not to say that this one did, but just as a pointer.

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

Too much religion.

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Mediocrity at its most average.

I dunno.  I thought it was pretty good.  It referenced religion without being a political attack on it.  Overall, funny!

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Thumbs up, but only briefly. Nice comic all the same.

too obvious of a punchline. push the envelope further.

"You mean the one you keep under you bed with all the naked boyscouts in it?"

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Kill Whitey.

AngryAmerican

Or even further...

"You mean the one you keep under the bed with all the naked boyscouts?"

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100 pounds of shit in a 25 pound sack.

Funny. This comic is a classic. Just try to zone in on the people you chose for characters. That boy is kinda strange-looking.

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I like CHEEEEEEEEEEEEESE!

I like your comix.

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http://www.ararat-productions.com/

As somone who lives with three Christian guys, these comics provide topical and comical relief to all the Bibles lying around and the "seven minutes with Jesus" prayer sessions every morning.

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The tongue licking the ars of pretension.