Steve and Jerry. by Licking_Tulips 5-15-07

Hey Steve. It seems we're working on a project together. ... oh god not Jerry again. ... Your realise you just said that out loud? I hate Jerry. ... I hate you. ... I ain't taking it back.

Steve and Jerry.

Steve and Jerry part 2 by Licking_Tulips 5-15-07

What? Hey Jerry! Guess What! How the hell is that funny!? I raped someone! .... I hate you.

Steve and Jerry.3 by Licking_Tulips 5-15-07

Thank God it's lunch break! Hey that's offensive to my religion! I didn't know you were catholic. I'm not. I'm a Satanist. God's name is offensive to my ears. ...... So can you like rotate your head 360 degrees. I'm not a freaking thermometer

the last one was "teh funny"

the rest were "teh meh"

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i am vaguely baffled and utterly unentertained. sorry.

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Kill Whitey.

On one and two, trying switching the characters so that their speech reads left to right.

Three appears to be fine.

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You can take the heart out of the hooker but you can't take the hooker out of the heart. -- Frankenhooker

Thanks for the advice, I've only just started making these. I hope I improve.

A new one. Hope you enjoy.

Steve and Jerry, Mornin'! by Licking_Tulips 5-16-07

Morning Steve! ... Please. I don't have to talk to you until I'm in the building. You just talked to me. .... Shut up. Your awfully mean. Please stop. I only just got out of jail.

I like just about every comic you've posted so far. I notice you use the ... before characters will talk to show that there is a pause before the character speaks. While I'm not saying it's an awful thing to do, it's sort of awkward looking IMHO. Other than that minor complaint, which I may be in the minority on, I like alot of your stuff. Keep up the good work.

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You don't know what I got... .

Thanks for the criticism everyone.

Steve and Jerry. Sacrifice? by Licking_Tulips 5-17-07

Hey St- Next peron who talks to me is gonna get nailed to my altar. Finally he's gone. He's like the grasshopper in my skin. Won't stop annoying me. I wish I had a bed.