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Snuff_Johnny
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9-07-07 12:58pm (new)
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Snuff_Johnny
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tell me what you think of it please !

9-07-07 1:07pm (new)
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Coolancs
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What is worse? maybe this comic.. sorry, but I dont really liked it

9-07-07 1:09pm (new)
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AngryAmerican
Here at least 3 times a year

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pretty crappy. try putting some effort into it.

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9-08-07 12:53am (new)
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Snuff_Johnny
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Coolancs

no i think the worst thing here is the way that you welcome a new user to the forums. sry, but i don't really liked it.

9-08-07 4:41am (new)
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HCRoyall
100mg Thorazine, Please

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We're not mean, we're just honest. If your comics suck, which they do, we'll tell you so. If they can be improved, we'll tell you, though this one seems a lost cause. If they're good, we'll say so; we haven't, so it isn't.

If you want nothing but "cool comic man", try posting them in the Read My Comic And Tell Me Nice Things About It forum.

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

9-08-07 5:11am (new)
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Snuff_Johnny
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If you're criticizing my comic, then post some helpful comments. ''They Suck'' doesn't really help me to get them better.

 

HCRoyall

 

I think it's the other way round...

 

9-08-07 6:12am (new)
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AngryAmerican
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sigh. all right, in a rare stab of humanitarianism, i am going to attempt to help you.

I've only been here about a year and a half and am already tired of the PLETHORA of people who post incredibly dumb comics then ask for opinions only to take offense when some of the regulars tell them how crappy the comic was. if you aren't prepared brutal honesty, don't ask. many of the regulars have been on this site for years, and have had literally thousands of horribly unfunny comics thrown at them in that time. cut them some slack....

ok, here we go:

first things first. the character you've chosen is clearly a goth. punks and goths don't share much in common except liking shitty music. they don't look anything alike. secondly, why is he saying "rrrrrr"? it comes off as forcing him into the role of a zombie when there is a perfectly servicable zombie character available for all your undead needs.

nextly, why is this guy terrified of a 100 lb goth boy? it doesn't make any sense...and why is he then more afraid of a punk than a zombie? i'd rather fight a punk any day. one punch=fight over, whereas with a zombie, you have to destroy if fucking head

last panel: you wasted a perfectly good opportunity to get in a last crack with the 'punk' character or setup the punchline. what the hell is "...?" how does that add to the comic? how is that funny? its not. and the man's response (which BTW constitutes a punchline) is uninspired and lame. there were a million other things you could've written there and every one of them would have been funnier.

hope this helps

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9-08-07 11:24am (new)
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AngryAmerican
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its not great, but given the premise i had to work with and not having had my morning bong yet, here's an improvement on your comic:

[Click to view comic: 'other possibilities']

 

you are welcome. paypal me some dough.

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9-08-07 11:32am (new)
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