the enthusiasm is great and you comics aren't bad, but you definitely need to get the hang of putting the dialogue bubbles in the correct order.
take this comic for example. just because the TV is facing an empty room doesn't mean the zombie has to appear there to deliver the punchline.
what you could've done is just switched the TV to the right facing character in the last panel and put the zombie in the right side of the panel. that way he isn't saying 'shit' before the reader even gets to read what he's saying 'shit' about. see?
now what you should've done is made TV right-facing from the very beginning and it would've seemed like the zombie was wandering in just st the right moment to catch that bit about the cops arresting zombies. ah-hah!
there. now that my benevolence quota for the week has been used up, you don't need a new thread for each new comic.
now take my words young grasshopper and soon you will blossom into a butterfly. or possibly a koi. something mystical.
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Kill Whitey.