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You should really stop posting every single one of your comics in a new thread. You're going to make angryamericans head explode.

ok but how do i go about doing that im still new to this so if you could help it would be great

You just replied to this thread, so you obviously know how to reply. Just keep posting them in one thread.

You know how to post, you know how to reply. You know how to do it and you don't need my help and I really don't understand why you're asking for it. Just stop posting a new thread for every comic you post.

the enthusiasm is great and you comics aren't bad, but you definitely need to get the hang of putting the dialogue bubbles in the correct order.

take this comic for example. just because the TV is facing an empty room doesn't mean the zombie has to appear there to deliver the punchline.

what you could've done is just switched the TV to the right facing character in the last panel and put the zombie in the right side of the panel. that way he isn't saying 'shit' before the reader even gets to read what he's saying 'shit' about. see?

now what you should've done is made TV right-facing from the very beginning and it would've seemed like the zombie was wandering in just st the right moment to catch that bit about the cops arresting zombies. ah-hah!

there. now that my benevolence quota for the week has been used up, you don't need a new thread for each new comic.

now take my words young grasshopper and soon you will blossom into a butterfly. or possibly a koi. something mystical.