http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/mostevil

please look at it and rate it the improved one because i forgot to do some stuff to the old one before saving it

yay i made a new one now people plz rate them

I will be honest. I never rate a comic other than good; this means that if I think it's good I'll give it a good. Otherwise I don't rate it. I didn't rate yours.

Your comics are bad. I think you are just taking whatever idea that comes into your head and throwing it down without really considering if it's actually funny. While such attempts might prove successful on television, in a medium such as this you have to really put some thought behind what you make.

My advice is to slow down, take some time with how you phrase things (improving your grammar is part of this), and don't try to force anything. Once you find your groove things will start flowing easy.

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

i would like the 30 seconds of my life i wasted looking at your comics back.

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Kill Whitey.

AngryAmerican

Ahhh, did you ever consider that the time it took you to read this comic is time you weren't kicking some guy in the eyeball?  So, in a way, it was a good use of time.

I thought the first "Transformers" one was pretty amusing.  Try to make some more comics that are pretty amusing.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.