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So what did you think was it funny please tell me

i didn't really care for it too much. try to avoid humor based on characters rather than dialogue, it all been done.

don't get discouraged. keep trying you must.

I thought it was alright, but I think I see what AngryAmerican means. I'm just noticing myself how the available character designs kind of push dialogue in certain directions. The second panel of the third comic seems to work in a "penultimate panel pause" kind of way what with the squinting, and I think that sort of thing can work well in terms of subtlety, but there's not a punchline to pick up what good that pause gets you.

Similarly, in the fourth comic, the last panel with the bunny guy's buggy eyes and the closed door works pretty well for me, but I can't figure out what sort of thing the bunny guy might have wanted to tell the wounded man in the second panel, so I'm floundering when I get to the punchline, so the "wow" doesn't do as much as it could there.

Come on people i could use some more reviews

I thought the punchlines weren't funny, the plot was forced by the characters you chose, and you ran out of ideas early but refused to admit it.

Let me know if you want more.

I think you should have just stopped with the first one...the rest just made it drag out too long and then ended up killing the humour.  Just my opinion but I think the object of a comic strip is really to deliver the humour in the quickest way possible.

You know, you really shouldn't say cuss words on any comics.

1) They make it less funny

2) They're just mean.

Cuss words aren't nice.  Check out some of my comics.  They're nice.  They don't have ANY cuss words.  Please stop doing that.  It makes stripcreator less fun.  You can create comics without cuss words that can be just as fun.  But calling people cuss words (and saying them) is bad.  This is just something I suggest.

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Coolio_cat wrote:

You know, you really shouldn't say cuss words on any comics.

1) They make it less funny

2) They're just mean.

Cuss words aren't nice. Check out some of my comics. They're nice. They don't have ANY cuss words. Please stop doing that. It makes stripcreator less fun. You can create comics without cuss words that can be just as fun. But calling people cuss words (and saying them) is bad. This is just something I suggest.

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Woah!  Those are really funny! Nice dude!

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Coolio_cat wrote:

You know, you really shouldn't say cuss words on any comics.

1) They make it less funny

2) They're just mean.

Cuss words aren't nice. Check out some of my comics. They're nice. They don't have ANY cuss words. Please stop doing that. It makes stripcreator less fun. You can create comics without cuss words that can be just as fun. But calling people cuss words (and saying them) is bad. This is just something I suggest.

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Ok... I'm going to do my very best to be unoffensive here, because I really am a nice guy. But I feel obligated to comment on this.

1. Maybe YOUR comics should be "cuss" word-free, but I, along with, oh, everyone else on the entire fucking site (sorry) happen to be mature enough to realize that any word, regardless of its' alleged "badness" can be used humorously. They may be used in a way that is not funny, but there are numerous comics that effectively make jokes involving bad words - take a look at Mandingo's comics for your proof.

2. On second thought, looking at Mandingo's comics may scar you and cause you to become a Mormon.

3. Profanity is one of the things that makes SC so fucking (sorry) great. I saw some other comic-creating site that actually doesn't allow profanity, hateful words, or anything else that can potentially lead to really great comics. Maybe you should go there.

4. Profanity is not always necessary - I have several comics with none whatsoever - but I also have comics with bad words you may not even know exist. However, some comics will just always be better with the occasional "fuckshitpisscockcuntass" (sorry.)

In closing, I'm seriously not trying to be a... butthead (see how much less funny that was than, for example "dickface" (sorry)? But, if you really expect people - anywhere, let alone the INTERNET, for god's sake - to change their vocabularies so as not to offend your delicate sensibilities, then you're in for a lot hard times in this life. So, let me just politely suggest you turn the obscenity filter on and deal with the fact that there is a lot of profanity on this motherfucking (sorry, that one was a little bit out of spite) awesome website.

Thanks for listening, if you did. If my words upset you, I'm sorry. But, they are, after all, just words. If you don't like me, make a comic that makes fun of me. If it's funny, I'll even have a laugh and rate it good.

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Coolio_cat wrote:

You know, you really shouldn't say cuss words on any comics.

1) They make it less funny

2) They're just mean.

Cuss words aren't nice.  Check out some of my comics.  They're nice.  They don't have ANY cuss words.  Please stop doing that.  It makes stripcreator less fun.  You can create comics without cuss words that can be just as fun.  But calling people cuss words (and saying them) is bad.  This is just something I suggest.

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Coolio_cat, I suggest not reading Nightwing.

In other news, chimichanga101, good work. Keep trying and you may begin to get better.