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AmishSunshine
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Hey. I'm new here.

Anyway, enough foreplay. Judge a man not by your first impression but by the content of his actions. Here's my comic:

Sad, But True
Did you hear? Tommorow is Martin Luther King Jr. Day!
Did you hear? Nobody gives a s**t!
  by AmishSunshine, 1-20-08 

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Two Iraqis walked into a bar...

1-20-08 4:52pm (new)
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AmishSunshine
Stripcreator Newbie

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1-20-08 5:11pm (new)
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AmishSunshine
Stripcreator Newbie

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1-20-08 5:32pm (new)
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AmishSunshine
Stripcreator Newbie

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1-21-08 12:03pm (new)
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AngryAmerican
Here at least 3 times a year

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i'm just not feeling it. sorry.

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Kill Whitey.

1-22-08 11:50am (new)
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Splunge
No soap, radio.

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I would suggest that if you have a character doing some kind of action, that you should chose characters that are actually making some kind of motion.

In fact I'd go as far as to suggest that you pick and choose carefully which toons that you use just as carefully as you might choose your words.

 A good cartoon/comic is a gestalt of word and action. Then you can consider the three beat joke. That is, using a three panel cartoon to get your humor across.

 One way to start would to be hitting random for your cartoon and then trying to decide what would be funny to others there. But do not spam the forums with your first ideas. While we have all done it, I am sure that we regret the earlier material.

 I know that I do.

Regardless, welcome. And be careful. It's a jungle in here.

   

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Bringing you comics, once a year. Whether you want them or not.

1-23-08 1:00am (new)
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theburninator
innocent bystander

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What they said. Also, don't censor yourself.

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what happened to my rustic monologue? ...i'm not sleeping with that producer again

2-09-08 4:47pm (new)
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LuckyGuess
hm

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The first one was funny, but the censored letters kind of killed it for me.

The one about the big dick email is an almost verbatim Lewis Black bit from Rules of Enragement.

I'd let that slide, but the one about breast enlargement is from the exact same bit. One literally leads into the other.

One thing you shouldn't do is use stand up comic material from other people as original comics. 

The others suffer from overuse of *actions* and self-censorship.

You are not horrible, however. Keep trying.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

2-10-08 1:01am (new)
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another_punchline
Junior Comic Technician

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That is from Lewis Black!

 Man, if you aren't stealing materiel you're not very funny.

2-10-08 2:18pm (new)
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