You use the narrator thing way too damn much and it only hindered the pacing of a already badly paced comic. Very rarely does using the narrator thing work and when it does it's funny but that was not the case here.
I almost laughed like twice, but then i remembered the comics sucked and didn't.
just kidding on the i almost laughed part..
I'm sorry that was mean, but quite frankly you need to slow down and spend some time on a comic instead of rushing through them like i have done before and so many newbies before us...
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if i was six years old i would hate girls..... in a completely hetero way of course.