I'm new here and didn't know how to add my comic here in my post but if someone could take a quick look at it and say if it's any good that'd be awesome. And if this sucks big time, feel free and be honest, I won't care

Sh*tload of Work by Neo11 5-05-08

I have to finish ALL of this work by tomorrow? HOLY SH*T!!! Now Frank, do we really need to bring our Lord into this? Oh, well sorry, I mean this is still BULLSH*T!!! Is that some sort of an insult? Oh, sorry too, maybe it's just. . . I don't know BACON SH*T then!!! Shut up man-I bet you didn't think I'd hear that huh?

All you gotta do is post the comic's URL on a seperate line in your post and it appears.

 I like where you're going with this, it feels a bit clumsy somehow, but I dig the humor.  All in all, you're on the right track.  Keep it up!

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"He was cursed with a horrorshow of a face, like Guiseppe Archbold doing a study of mollusk tumors."

I like it.  But just type out "shit."  It's fine.  It's okay.  If anyone doesn't want to read it, they'll turn on the obscenity filter.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

decent comic.

you from ohio or something? or just can't get enough buckeyes?

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Kill Whitey.

Thanks for the feedback so far. And yeah I'm from Ohio and am a big Buckeye fan!! Here's one more comic if anyone would like to have a look:

 

Up for Some Drinks? by Neo11 5-06-08

You up for a few beers tonight Carl? No way Frank. Remember last time we did that: You got really drunk, punched me in the face, then you flirted with my wife all night!! Oh yeah, I've, uh, been meaning to ask you something ever since then.... It better be "can you forgive me?" Um, are you two still together after that night? because I think she really liked me You are an ass Frank

Another good comic.  I think you could come up with something better than "You are an ass," but it works okay.  Excellent set-up.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Ok, here's one more for anyone who'd like to check it out. This is now my 4th comic overall:

Classic Prank by Neo11 5-07-08

You like that prank I pulled on everyone today by hiding their pens? Ah, that was you? haha good one Oh yeah, what was it? Actually, I played a prank on everyone too but nobody seemed to notice I urinated in the pot of coffe before anyone showed up. haha classic

Great use of Melvin's expressions, but there are two huge problems with that comic:

1)  Melvin should probably be talking about urinating in the coffee, since the other guy is the one holding the coffee cup.

2)  Unfortunately, the only way to change the speaking order is to change the positions of the characters in the panel.  Panel 2 is very confusing because the dialog on the right comes before the one on the left.  That's kind of confusing since they happen to be speaking English.

But I'm still a fan of yours.  Let's see some more.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Thanks again for the feedback. I did realize that it was kind of out of order in the second frame but I thought it might be somewhat awkward to have the characters jump around so I let it go.

 But for some reason it never occurred to me that it would be better to have the opposite person be the one drinking out of the coffee mug. I agree that it's kind of a choice of characters considering the dialogue.

I kind of like that the Boss is the one drinking the coffee after he peed in it. I think the set up would have worked better if the Boss was the one explaining how he punked everyone in the first panel, and then get Melvyn's reaction shot in the third.

This is how I would have done it:

After Neo (431579) by crowspeaker 5-08-08

I played a prank on everyone, but no one seemed to notice. Were you the one who hid everyone's pens? No, I urinated in the coffee pot before everyone showed up. Classic!

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Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?

Much better, I'd say.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

All I can say is that I agree. The way you posted flows quite a bit better than what I had. My only defense is that I just started so give me a chance haha