"American Idle" television show (Part I) by story_teller 5-25-08

American Idle Hello, I'm Ryan Seacrust, I look like a frog in the face, and this is "American Idle: Search For A Super Tart." Let's meet our judges. This is Randy Junksaid. What up, Dawg? I'm just not feelin' you, Man. This is Paula Absurd. I have a constant grin on my face. I talk with slurred speech, but I'm not high or drunk (??). There's sexual tension between me and another judge, and I'm the most useless judge here.

"American Idle" television show (Part II) by story_teller 5-25-08

This is Simon Scowl. Awright, I'll impatiently lean back in my chair as I run the palm of my hand through my hair and talk slowly and in a demeaning way to you. Is...that...clear? Celebrity Guest Singer A few minutes later... That was most possibly the worst sound that a human being could make in the whole universe given an infinite amount of time! Simon! She is NOT a contestant. She came on as a favor to the show. You are NOT here to review her.

not my cup of tea, but you show an ability to stick with a theme and that's something.

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Kill Whitey.

The punchline needed more punch. There is some miniscule amount of potential here, but the ending was a huge letdown. Keep trying, you might surprise us.

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Ever fart in a can of pop and drink it?

Thank you both for your constructive criticism.  I have made many other comics from Stripcreator before, but this is the first time I managed to post it in a relevant thread.

That was really good.  I'm not a comic reader, just a creator so don't use my opinion.

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Fleury 19+10