fleury29,
in the last panel, it has "Flue my ..."
Was that an intentional spelling for the first letter
of the first word? Would you have rather used a
dialogue bubble instead of the thought bubble for
the man in the last panel? I think the stretched out
scene in the last panel makes a pretty picture/pattern,
regardless of how it adds to your comic. "You've gone
where few panels have gone before."