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story_teller
Stripcreator Newbie

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 Adult content -- but no cursing

 

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/story_teller

6-21-08 10:47pm (new)
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crabby
I have an awesome avatar.

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Needs more cursing.

 

6-21-08 11:07pm (new)
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choadwarrior
Crash Magnet

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I think there should be a comma between semen-filled and glow-in-the-dark. It distracted me from enjoying this comic.

6-21-08 11:15pm (new)
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story_te11er
Stripcreator Newbie

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You're being childish and stupid, choadwarrior.

My points are true and constructive.

Get off of this thread. 

 

6-22-08 4:13pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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While the sentence "My points are true and constructive," is gramatically correct (going by parts of speech), it's awkward to read because "a point" (in the sense of the essential theme of a speech, as opposed to a tapering extremity) is not usually modified by the word "true" in the sense of "holding veracity" (as opposed to "actual.")

Were you to use that particular lexcon in another example (e.g. "I found his true points to be constructive.") you will note that "true" begins to take on the meaning of "actual," rather than "valid," which is no doubt what you meant to convey in your sentence above.

You should be more careful in your word choices in the future to make sure the true point of what you are trying to convey shows through in you criticism, which is not only constructive but also much admired both on this site and throughout the intellectual community of the Internet.

Thank you.

 

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

6-22-08 8:35pm (new)
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choadwarrior
Crash Magnet

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So is your name story_teelevener now, or is it story_teoneoneer? I don't know how to properly address you since numbers and letters don't belong together in standard English words.

6-22-08 9:17pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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6-23-08 11:03am (new)
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UnknownEric
and the Goblet of Mountain Dew.

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I've clearly been missing some fun shit over in RMDC, eh?

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6-23-08 11:10am (new)
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