Take a look at my comics and let me know what you think. I'll try and post more every week or so.

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/Quatar/

Enjoy,

Quatar.

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I plan on enjoying my awesome vampire rp so if anyone wants to enjoy one with me come and play at http://z11.invisionfree.com/Flame_Role_Playing

mehhhhh

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dome

i think you're getting much too ambitious. Try to avoid all the narration, its not advancing any kind of plot nor advancing any kind of funny, its just distracting...

unfortunately in the case of these 3 comics, its not distracting enough. there's simply nothing amusing goin on.

where's the joke? the punchline? hell, even the uncomfortable douche chill?

DON'T get discouraged. make more comics and stick around and you'll start to get a feel for what makes us SC idiots chuckle.

then my good sir, you will get stars. and everyone loves stars...

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Kill Whitey.

I redid the series look at The New Adventures of Kalo and Quatar they should be more funny then the origional plot.

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I plan on enjoying my awesome vampire rp so if anyone wants to enjoy one with me come and play at http://z11.invisionfree.com/Flame_Role_Playing

There's still nothing really going on. You seem to just run with whatever happens to come into your head, when what you need to do is slow down and think about your comics. Before you hit the button to save te comic, look it over. Make sure that what's written is written properly and and that what you intended to have happen is actually happening. By this, I mean humor. Randomness in comics can work for some people, but it doesn't work for you, not right now.

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

Those comicss depressed the shit out of me. I'm now depressed because I read your comics.

Those comics...

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RedfeatheR

I totally did my job then lol just kidding dude. I think I will start to do that with the next set of these comics. I appriciate the help guys I'm really just starting out cause if anyone here reads really good webcomics like Megatokyo then you'd understand why. My cousen co-created the origional megatokyo and has really inspired me so I think I'll take what you guys have told me and I definately thank you all.

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I plan on enjoying my awesome vampire rp so if anyone wants to enjoy one with me come and play at http://z11.invisionfree.com/Flame_Role_Playing

Oh come on guys they arn't that bad. He just needs to take more time on them thats all. Just work on making them a bit more thought out ok. Thats all you gatta do.

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I own you all!!!

Thanks kalos i appriciate it. I have to agree with them however as it looks like crap. I'll just have to keep trying and working on it until I get better. Thanks again.

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I plan on enjoying my awesome vampire rp so if anyone wants to enjoy one with me come and play at http://z11.invisionfree.com/Flame_Role_Playing