[Click to view comic: '4 ways to get dumped by your girlfriend: 1']

tell me if you like it & if I should make #2

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Fash Forever

I like it too. You had a great use of the Narration. You also had the perfect storyline. I think you should make another one. It would be a site to read. Keep up the good work

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You have my most solemn and honourbound of vows that clicking this link will not direct you to a youtube video of a rick roll

Aye, good enough, it all fits together nicely even if the punchline, although funny, isn't too 'punchy'. In my opinion you could decide whether to use 'Now I don't have to tell her she's a bad kisser' OR 'What was her sister's number again' as the punchline, and it may even benefit from taking the first sentence out completely. If it were my comic, i'd have left the last panel with the girl saying simply nothing, giving the guy a perplexed and accusatory stare (or at least thats how it'd look to me), and the guy thinking 'Now, what was her sister's number again?'. That's me and my style though, and many will think the comic works better as it is now. This is because its good anyway.

But yes, make more, please.

lima

thanks for the tip, i'll surely put it to use :)

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Fash Forever

What was the fourth? Or is that a set up for the proposed sequel?

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Mediocrity at its most average.

I agree that you've got lots of potential, so keep 'em coming.  My 0.02USD would be to remove some of the visual clutter.  I understand that using the explosion background in the 2nd panel contributes to the dialogue, but it also gets in the way.  Also, I'm not sure why the 3rd is red.  IMHO, the background should simply be the background and should not occupy any more of the reader's attention than necessary.  Sorry to nitpick, but I do want to see more!

attitudechicka

I don't have a fourth, but I'm about to do number #2 right now, Read it!!

So this is a proposal for the sequel :)

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Fash Forever