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Sunny2
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Oil by Sunny2
1-07-09
Maid robot, get me a drink!
Bzzt.. can't.. oil change
I didn't ask for oil, I asked for soda.
No, no, need.....
ooh......
Oil change.

 

 
Garage sale by Sunny2
1-08-09
Hey Rob! What are you doing in that junk pile?
I'm digging up some old stuff for my garage sale!
That's nice. Oh, watch out! I think somwhere there I set up a-
YOOOOOOOWCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mouse trap.
$#**!!"#%&$!!!!

 
Same mistake... by Sunny2
1-08-09
Hey Rob! What are jou doing in that junk pile.....again?
Looking for old stuff again!
*See episode "Garage sale"
You'd better watch out... remember what happened last time?* There's a lot of heavy metal gadgets there!
No worries! This time I've got it covered! Everthing's under control!
Ok, then, I can go now. Glad you're good.
I'm stuck.

 
Shoop by Sunny2
1-08-09
*See episodes "Garage sale" and "Same mistake"
Oh, Rob!! Not AGAIN! Remember what happened the last TWO times*?? Get out of that junk pile right now!!
How can you be so dumb??? The last time I spent two hours trying to get you out with a CROWBAR! Well, I'm not doing it again!
Don't worry...
...this time he got ME to do it.

 

 
CC412 entry by Sunny2
1-08-09
Have you got anything planned for the new year?
Oh, yeah! I've got a HUGE party coming up!
Are you sure that's a good idea? Last time we had to clean up all that vomit..
Don't worry!
This time I'm not letting the goat anywhere near the toxic confetti.

 

 [Click to view comic: 'On crack']

 

 [Click to view comic: '*Nosegrow*']

 

 [Click to view comic: 'Home-made junk']

 

You liek?

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1-08-09 11:50am (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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No.

Home-made junk is a good idea, but it trips over its own overly-complex wording.  Try to write your dialog as simple as possible while still making it sound like natural speech.  Then the concept might've been funny.

I have more opinions about the others, of course.  But this one was the most obvious.

 

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

1-08-09 2:53pm (new)
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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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Keep working at it, you'll get better. 

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

1-08-09 3:29pm (new)
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vagrancy
I'm probably Martie.

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You have an good overall format. Now you need that extra... how do you say... manrape in your comics. Keep on strippin'.

 

=)

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A clear conscience is usually the sign of a bad memory.

1-10-09 11:39am (new)
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