1. Your writing is difficult to follow. If English isn't your first language, don't be afraid to write in your first language. If you do write in English, pay more attention to things like spelling, word order, and whether your text is getting cut off.
2. There's no need to jam as much as possible into a single comic. Why not do one comic per movie and give your observations more space?
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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!