I read the first five then decided I have much better ways to spend my time. Like running a file across my teeth, or dragging my balls over fish hooks.
There, now that the insulting, angry comment is out of the way, I'll actually try to offer you some advice.
For the most part serial comics don't work very well here. For them to work they would have to be much better than these ones. People here are for the most part devoted to the funny, make them snort their booze through their nostrils and they will love you. Make them waste a minute of their time on a story with no laughs that goes on and on and on, and they will shred you in the forums and possibly make you cry.
Take a few minutes to browse through the top rated comics and see what sells here, then be inspired, maybe smoke some weed or something, and have another crack at it.
Good luck...
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Kill Whitey.
