Suppose to go swimming num. 1 by lovedocta10 6-19-09

from 6:30-8:00AM wake up man! Time to go swimming! ZZZZ!!! *SNORE* ZZZZZZ!!!!ZZZ!!ZZ!! From 8:10-9:30 AM Wake Up!! *stab* WAKE UP!!!!!! Gnome's with flowers,ZZZ...Bunnyz kissing Dragons!!!ZZZZ!!! We were suppose to go swimming today!! Come on, Wake up!!! ZZZ!!! Bunnyz!!ZZ! Rainbows!!ZZZ!! Lepracohn doing the waltz!!!ZZZZZZ

suppose to go swimming 2 by lovedocta10 6-19-09

From 9:30- 10:30AM aargh!! This is annoying!!! ZZZZZ!!! I Feel Cold!! like a???? Jalopeno!!! holding bunnyz on a rainbow over a dancing lapracahn from 10:40-11:30AM What next???? ZZZZ!!! I'm hot tonight hot hot tonight!!ZZZZ !!!! from 11:45-1:00 This oughta wake him up!!! ZZZZ!!! BUZZ!! BEEZ!!!ZZZ!!! BEEP!!!ALIENS !!!ZZZZZ!!

Reading these comics are a lot like having sex with Lady Gaga; scary, confusing, and when you're done, you're not quite sure what just happened.

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More lust than you can shake a stick at.

you saying you wouldnt?

Suppose to go swimming 3 by lovedocta10 6-19-09

1:00-3:00 PM uh hummm.... 8 0z bottle 5 oz g-powder 5 oz blk-powder ....etc... ZZZZZ!!!! LA LA LA ZZZZ!!! FIGULAZIMAH FIGLEY...zzzz 3:10-5:00PM U got to be kidding he is still sleeping!!!! uh screw this im going to play some video games!!! ZZZZ!!! Noises ZZZ!!! Zombies!!!ZZZZ!!! 5:30-7:00 pm Yah! Hello......You got to be kidding! NO WAY!!!...* hang up* Uh hey, yah well i was just wondering if u wanted to go swimming tomorrow???

By the way the ppls in the slides are named jack and nathan in these ones NATHAN is guy trying to wake up friend JACK

Just a few tips for ya:

• Stick with the same characters, like with this bunch, they'd be better if you didn't completely confuse the reader with a whole bunch of random characters and a normal plotline
•  Check for mistakes and try and improve your grammar with the "You"'s and stuff, just an opinion, don't get defensive.

Other than that, I think they're fine. I wouldn't want to read them all the time, but they're reasonable and okay to read.

And now for no apparent reason I will post a picture of a llama ;P

Welcome to stripcreator!

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Its suppose to be ( suppose to go to fair 1)

Suppose to go swimming 1 by lovedocta10 6-20-09

day before fair Hey man you wanna got to the fair tommorrow i already bought tickets? OK, i'll make sure i go to bed earlyier this time.,,,., cya later Right before nathan goes to bed If he don't wake up tommorow idk wat im gonna do??? Ha! Ha! i look like a......-Stick of TNT 7:00 AM Nathan found jack sleeping again!! Not this crap again!!! ZZZ!!! Fair! Rides!!! ZZZZ!YAH!!zzzz...

Well this one kinda happened in real life except jack(me)was the one trying to wake up nathan.... who woundn't wake up no matter what!!!, anyway i switched the characters around.

Uhh this was the 1st commic i made so umm it an't tht good its even worse then the others i thought i'd post this one before i got off so can u just like picture this at the top of the list,...thx

Ro-by-man vs. zombies by lovedocta10 6-19-09

While a zombie invasion was going on a robot got corrnerd by a Zombie!!!!! Don't eat me!!!, i don't taste good!?! Shut up! don't make me take away whats most dear to you!! The Virgin Robot is scared he will never get to plug-in!!! Please no anything but tht!!! Please I still havent pluged-in yet!!? Not That! What are you gay! The zobie invasion has gotten bgger then they could of ever thought! Everyone is going crazy!!! no.......my circuits can plug-in both ways!?! I can assist you with That!! OH, WEE WEE!!!!!

Remember once again picture this at the top!!! thx u

That narrator guy is getting on my nerves.

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I was gonna send a robot back in time, but I got high.

suppose to go to fair 2 by lovedocta10 6-20-09

7:10-9:00AM Well i thought that one would work, oh well i call doctor later ZZZZZZZZZZ!!!! DOCTOR!!!!NNNOOO!!! ZZZZZzzzz... 9:10-10:30AM OK, I have no clue how he didn't wake up tht time? I think you should talk to the sandman about this..... 10:45-12:30AM Yah, sandman i was wondering if you could help my friend with his sleeping problem,???? Ok I'll Be over tomorrow and deliever-THE SAND....

this what school is like sometimes for some teenage boys!.

Normal day at school trying not to get *happy* by lovedocta10 7-12-09

Inside classroom Don't look at her boobs don't look at her boobs.. Hey hows it going? Inside nurse office I think i have a temperature it feels hot were ever i go?!? Well i might have to take a closer look maybe you should go talk to my assistant she is in the back room Inside backroom of school Well i might be dreaming,,,,but oh well!!! So where do you want us to start the exam?

Suicide is always an option

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Kill Whitey.

is funny by lovedocta10 7-13-09

so an aribian guy and a - HOLD ON A MINUTE! let me finish my joke u little tights waering freak im leaving. a few moments later ... huh!? ok so two jews walk in a bar...

my friend made this one it was his first time....

I stopped reading when I saw the word "aribian"

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random dumbness!!!!....and stupidness by lovedocta10 8-23-09

A guy is getting haunted by a ghost so u think u can kill me? of coarse ur not emortal he burns the body yet still it stays alive Thts wat u think! Oh yah.... he kicks the guy under a car and.....wow it actually killed him This is sparta!!!!!....and stuff!!! oww........stupid squirell

It's a good idea for a comic, but the fact that you have to narrate the whole thing effectively murders any humor that might've been there.  You have to show the jokes with action -- which in the case of this particular joke might be impossible with this particular comic generator.

Keep trying... just don't try to do what the tool won't let you.  If you can't show the action with the pictures, you just can't do the action.  Narrating it never works.

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