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elevenbirds
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crossing the barrier by elevenbirds
8-27-09
brrrrrr
well...my ride's leaving...maybe i could get your number?
rrrrrrrmmp
is that that a yes?
sorry i was farting, its 451 5400
jee actually this is movin kinda fast, i don't do farts until at least the third date

Comedy is a living breathing organism by elevenbirds
8-28-09
You know that yada yada yada seinfeld episode?
i'm familiar
Wouldn't it be awesome if we could apply that to jokes...you know yada yada yada then the punchline?
That's an appalling idea you lazy philistine! How dare you try reduce the comedic art to formulaic drivel! Go watch Friends!
so yada yada yada bananas foster!!
bwahahahahaha!!!

Always choose discrete by elevenbirds
8-28-09
hey loose cooch! Your giant black dildo came in the mail!!!
my....what?
That neon pink package that I just dropped off on your desk! Says Giant Black Didlo on it!!! And your name!! Triceratops!!! In flashing lights!
....oh god...
didn't think the discrete shipping was worth the extra money eh?
.....

8-28-09 11:53pm (new)
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HCRoyall
100mg Thorazine, Please

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I say this to every newbie, and it should really be part of the FAQ or something, but unless you're posting separate series nobody likes it when you make a new thread every time you post new comics. Some of us try to follow the threads of other newbies that seem promising, and someone making a new thread for every new handful of comics (or in some cases each new comic they make) floods the forum and makes it hard for us to do that.

As for your comics, my statement from the last batch you posted still stands. You show promise, and the first two made me crack a smile if not chuckle to myself, but you seem almost like you're trying too hard.  Also, ease up on the exclamation points.  Sometimes they work in multiples, but very infrequently.  They definitely don't work in the third comic.

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

8-29-09 5:50am (new)
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