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3xxoxx3
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10-07-09 4:44pm (new)
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LittleRocker
The Return

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Dude stop making new threads everytime you have a new unfunny comic.
Its a waste of space.
If you want people to see your comics so bad then just put them all in one thread.
Or you could quit.
either was I dont care.

10-07-09 4:47pm (new)
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3xxoxx3
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Dude I dont care about your opinion, you should like give me pointers not say i should quit. Give me info that i can really use besides(not to be offensive) but your comics arent really that good.

10-07-09 5:34pm (new)
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LittleRocker
The Return

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ahaa!
Is that why i have 4 stars and you have 0.
Im not saying quit im saying try harder.
and please keep your comics in ONE Thread
we dont wanna see 50 billion usless threads hanging around.

10-07-09 5:37pm (new)
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3xxoxx3
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10-07-09 5:41pm (new)
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3xxoxx3
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Dude that star rating system was uncalled for... Some people have a haredr time you know. Not to be joking but a tear came out of my eye.

10-07-09 5:43pm (new)
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LittleRocker
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Dude.
Just try harder on your comics.
Everyones bad when they begin,
Dont rush it.
Pick good punchlines
and you'll be fine for this site.

10-07-09 6:05pm (new)
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3xxoxx3
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10-08-09 6:45am (new)
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3xxoxx3
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Like this?

10-08-09 6:46am (new)
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theneworldpost
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dude u ripped that punchline off

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"NIMITZ!"

10-08-09 6:46am (new)
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3xxoxx3
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Wow my brother does jokes and he came up with this one, so i just decided to put it in a comic.

10-08-09 3:55pm (new)
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3xxoxx3
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10-13-09 7:22pm (new)
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joshb1214
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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good one francisco. haha dude. great joke 

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Boogying with Jesus and some Nazi hoes, sitting front row at a fucking Justin Bieber show.

10-13-09 7:29pm (new)
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3xxoxx3
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3xxoxx3 If you desire to be a desirable, don't you need to desire those desireables that are desiring to desire you aswell?

10-13-09 7:31pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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You have presented a funny situation, not a funny comic.  Funny situation:  Someone sees his friend looking at porn and realizes its his sister on the screen.  But turning it into a comic requires you to add a zing at the end, a sort of "punch line" if you will.  See what you think of this:

Reworking Comic 476411 by not_Scyess
10-14-09
Hey, man. What's up?
Not much, man. Just looking at some porn.
Is it any good?
Well, check this girl out. She has a lot of talent potential.
Isn't that your sister?
I didn't know she was that flexible.

The punchline is punchier, making it a better comic.  It is also gramatically correct, for people who care about that sort of thing. (A lot do).

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

10-14-09 7:38am (new)
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3xxoxx3
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Thanks for the info, I really appreciate the help but not the grammar part. Anyways thanks.

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If you desire to be a desirable, don't you need to desire those desireables that are desiring to desire you aswell?

10-14-09 5:09pm (new)
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