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happykomicz
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Crazy! Bonkers! Hiliarious! All ways to describe my comics!

They're about the wacky adventures of a dim-witted bald man

named Larry Slater.  Please read 'em. 

 

 

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happykomicz
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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CHARACTERS

-Larry Slater is a dumb bald man. He is often seen in a bow tie.

-Stephanie Slater is Larry's wife. She has been cheated on about 3 times in the comics.

-John Smith is Larry's drunken friend. He is often in his underwear.

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happykomicz
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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happykomicz
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happykomicz
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happykomicz
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happykomicz
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happykomicz
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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They're crappy. They're awesome

[Click to view comic: 'Cruelty At The Office']

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happykomicz
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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happykomicz
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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happykomicz
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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biped
Mr. Wonderful

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"Often" wearing a bowtie?  Looks to me like he's ALWAYS wearing a bowtie!

CASE CLOSED!!!

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

10-08-09 7:56pm (new)
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crabby
I have an awesome avatar.

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Your comics are bonkers!

10-08-09 8:57pm (new)
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evil_d
Riding through your town with his head on fire

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happykomicz

Seriously, this is the funniest thing in this thread.  Write more lines like this. 

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

10-08-09 9:48pm (new)
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happykomicz
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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biped

That's hiliarious!

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happykomicz
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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happykomicz
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happykomicz
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happykomicz
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happykomicz
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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happykomicz
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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HCRoyall
100mg Thorazine, Please

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happykomicz

That's hiliarious!


That's biped.

I quite enjoyed the Ruler of Mars series.  You have a lot of unnecessary dialogue in your comics, particularly in the third panel.  All this does is detract from the punchline, or in some cases, completely hide it or ruin the climax of the joke.  Before you submit your comics, take some time and read over them a couple times; make sure that any dialogue is absolutely necessary and get rid of anything that isn't.

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

10-09-09 7:46pm (new)
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Ogyaf
Resident Batman Fanboy

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I rated the following comics as "Good":  Hell 1, That Star Trek Show, Ruler of Mars 2, My Teenage Daughter, On The Computer, Brother From Another Mother, Larry's New Pet, What a Tragedy! 2, and Ruler of Mars 5. 

I see you yourself have a zero star rating with one vote -- I think you warrent an "Okay" rating from me.

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[i]You're born alone -- You die alone -- But still we live on.[br] Yesterday is a memory -- Tomorrow is a vision -- But today... It's a bitch[/i] Zug Izland - "Life"

10-10-09 4:09am (new)
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evil_d
Riding through your town with his head on fire

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happykomicz

The first panel of this is hilarious (or would be with the typo fixed).  It's funny because of what it leaves to the reader's imagination -- it doesn't spell out what it doesn't need to.  And it's quick.  The second and third panels, in contrast, are slow and obvious.  So... write more stuff like the first panel and less stuff like the rest.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

10-12-09 6:48am (new)
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happykomicz
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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10-12-09 12:29pm (new)
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