Hi, new here. Just hoping to get some critique on my Bunnyman series. Fifty comics so far. You can see the rest of them in my profile. It's very dry and cynical humor, hope you like.

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/l0zor/

You can post the comics by posting the URL of the comic you want to display. You don't have to use an image of the comic. It hurts my eyes. They are hard to read.

As for the Bunnyman series, I only read the one that hurt my eyes and I thought it was funny jesus seemed to be hopping away in the third panel. Your portrayal of Jesus as a coward was funny, but I did not read any others in the series, choosing to first come here and tell you to post your comics properly. I'm sorry if this make me come off as an ass.

Thanks for your reply! I'd like to post the comics the proper way but I haven't figured out how to see the URL except for just after I made the strip. Since the comic is a sequence of events I don't think it would have been appropriate to post the more recent ones and skip the older ones. But after some travelling bunnyman is now back home again so I will post new ones in this thread the proper way if I think they're worth it.

After franticly making 50 bunnyman strips I got curious what people like and what they didn't like. For instance these 50 strips all have bunnyman as the main character, did people get bored with that? Should I have made some without bunnyman to show other characters more such as the pirates or Cthulhu? Are the really bad jokes working or are they just... bad? Stuff like that.

People can leave comments on the strips so I won't post any older ones here (as I said I don't know how to anyway) You can browse through the comics in my profile, I hope they won't hurt your eyes there. For those who already left comments I thank you.

Crabby no offense buddy but you are an ass naturally ;) anyway the URL is just the address in your address bar as for the first one pretty good but like my colleague crabby said i'll just wait till they are posted here

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Resident Masochist & Adrenaline Junkie -I'm probably not god but you should worship me just in case-

Well how about that? I just had to post the URL of the comic. Thanks for the tip Lord! Posting the first eight strips now.

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 1']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 2']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 3']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 4']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 5']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 6']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 7']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 8']

The acid and the snowman one were great i personally write alot of comics about acid and none of them were as good as that one

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Resident Masochist & Adrenaline Junkie -I'm probably not god but you should worship me just in case-

I thought that was a great series.  I disagree about the acid one... all you have to do is choose random backgrounds and characters and say something about drugs to get a cheap laugh.  Emphasis on "cheap," deemphasis on "laugh."

You should donate money so you can switch the characters around in #4.  It doesn't make sense for bunnyman to say "I see your point" before the dog says anything.

 But that's enough constructive criticism.  As I said, I enjoyed the series as a whole.  My favorites were #2, #6, and #7.  (Would throw #4 in there if you reverse the characters!)

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Thanks! I'd love to donate something but I've never used the internet to transfer money so I'm going to have to sort a few things out first (unless there's a bankaccount I can just transfer money to) Anyway you're right, I should change those characters around.

Here's strip 9 to 17. Hope you enjoy them!

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 9']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 10']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 11']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 12']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 13']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 14']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 15']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 16']

[Click to view comic: 'Bunnyman 17']

For the most part those were good but 15 was kinda stupid 11 would have been funnier without "Nope prepare to die"...kinda killed the great punch line you had there but some of those were really good you've got talent and plenty of potential just keep working at it

Those comics were good though...

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Resident Masochist & Adrenaline Junkie -I'm probably not god but you should worship me just in case-

I thought they were funny

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