You write tolerably well in your forum posts. Why make your comics so unintelligible?
Once you've solved that problem, you could turn your attention to the issue of writing comics that make some kind of sense and maybe have a punchline.
I don't mean to (just) be sarcastic. I'm genuinely interested to see what you write after you address these two issues.
Welcome to stripcreator.
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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!
