Two things I feel I should mention before getting into the serious critique.
1. Please keep to one thread unless you're trying to keep comics from separate series together. It's really annoying when a new guy makes a new thread every time he makes another handful of comics.
2. You seem to be suffering from a bad case of Brain Diarrhea. Symptoms include uninhibited use of the random comic layout button and an inordinate amount of comics without a dangerously low humor count. Don't be alarmed; this is a common ailment of new members but it will pass with time. Criticism seems to be the most effective cure, though many new members are reluctant to take their medicine as needed.
I see nuggets of jokes in your comics, but very little that is really amusing. It's easy for someone new to get enamored with the toy they just found here, but if you want laughs you're going to need to slow down and tone it down.
We tend to be grammar sticklers here. We aren't going to tear you a new one every time you make a spelling or gramar error, but considering you have the time to do so you'll get much more positive responses if you proofread your comics and posts.
As for the humor content: Before you click that button to save your work, read over it to yourself. Is it really that funny now that it's in print? If the joke isn't as funny in print as it was in your head, don't use it. Or, work with it until it IS.
The biggest thing to consider is that if you're just making comics to amuse yourself and don't care what we think, don't post them in the forums. Eventually someone will comment. But if you're trying to make us laugh, keep at it and use what tips we give you, and sooner or later you'll find your niche.
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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.
