I found this site today and I am addicted. I hope I post right.

Vacationing on a Budget by LameLoLsCatt 12-31-10

I was expecting to see a donkey me too That's just a beagle spray painted gray They did a great job training him to hold that pin pong paddle This is what you get for booking a two for one vacation through Mexpedia.com Ooo..they even trained him to eat the bubbles

Good start.  I didn't discover punchlines until I'd been here at least six months.

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Legend, oh legend, the third wheel legend...always in the way.

thank you...much appreciated

Good job so far, here's my fav

By Billy by LameLoLsCatt 12-31-10

you didnt see anything, right? yes daddy!, i saw you wrestlin with the basketball player... ohh boy...

I liked 'Vacationing....'

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Kill Whitey.

I liked "By Billy"...but I've always been an avid race fan!

Thanks folks! I appreciate the comments and thanks for reading my stuff :D

I'd say what you have is a fairly good start, and keep em coming. "Sumblinal Pep Talk" was great

Thank you!