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Kahlil
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Introducing Boots Ondaground

Testing out the equipment here.

*Warning: politics on board

Wondering how well this works and whether the humor's too dark.

-Cowboy Kahlil

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Happy trails to ya, Cowboy Kahlil

3-07-03 1:00am (new)
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ArtemisStrong
masturbating to Japanese shit porn

Member Rated:

Many sodomy is needed.

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Ham-fisted ham fisting.

3-07-03 1:51am (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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Okay, as a general rule, politically dogmatic cartoons aren't funny. In this one, I wasn't even sure what your dogma was, only that it was there, which makes it worse. Also, your choice of characters (specifically the "ghost") is really confusing.

Comedically, though, you seem to have a good sense of how the comic should flow, and how the timing should work. Skip the dogma and play around some more and you'll probably churn out some good stuff.

But you haven't yet.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

3-07-03 8:29am (new)
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