That "splitter" background sure is the bee's knees!

[Click to view comic: 'Let's create some "rap" music!']

I like your comics, but you need to stop pulling the title of your comic out of the comic itself. You know that little cringy feeling you get when you hear the title of a movie actually spoken in the movie? Thats what I get when I read your comics. Try to be a little more imaginative in your titles.

I think it's forgivable as long as it doesn't give away the punchline, which it does in several of Chairman MAO's comics. Like this one, which is otherwise very funny.

My other favorites include the one posted above, and this one here. The strips in general are somewhat bizarre. Sometimes that works and sometimes it doesn't, but I wouldn't say that any of them are actually bad.

So, keep up the good work, and welcome to Stripcreator.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!