The comics started out not bad, and they get better as you progress. The narration bar is kind of a set deal now, I suppose, but it's still unnecessary in EVERY COMIC. The "year" thing is a little off-putting, as is your complete disregard for spelling, grammar, and punctuation. (A few times, lack of these things actually obscured the meaning of what you were trying to say.)
Fix all those little things and you'll go from being a decent stripper to a great stripper.
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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002
