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Eradream
Stripcreator Newbie

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4-09-03 3:26pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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The whole "in-comic references to being on Stripcreator" theme is a bit old, but if you can ignore that the comics were quite funny. I approve. Mostly.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

4-09-03 11:23pm (new)
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microfetus
Junior Comic Technician

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I liked the first two but then it just kind of went downhill and dressed up in women's clothing from there. Too many comics in a row focusing on the same joke are bad for business. Just look at 8-Bit Theater. (although in your case "too many" is referring to only three)

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4-09-03 11:39pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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Now there's a mixed metaphor I can get behind and support all the way to the ballot box, and then eat with a spoon!

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

4-10-03 12:37am (new)
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PhreakyChinchilla
DANGER WILL ROBINSON!

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I didn't find the girl turning into Wirthling everytime she looked at the reader very funny. I think your delivery is pretty good and you aren't over narrating, both positive signs.

Now just work on the 'funny' part.

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Crabby: 10/5/06: i would love to feed you fresh fruit while bathing you.

4-10-03 6:25am (new)
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evil_d
Riding through your town with his head on fire

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Some of these jokes have been done before, but I think this was a decent rendition of them. I thought the girl turning into Wirthling's head was pretty funny. I have to admit I don't get part 4.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

4-10-03 10:05am (new)
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Choobychooby
Loveable Scamp

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I don't know if I get any of them.

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4-10-03 12:15pm (new)
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Eradream
Stripcreator Newbie

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[Click to view comic: 'Era XXVI - Sonic boom, and away!, part IV.']

Thanks for the input. Aye, they've probably inevitably been done before, but I wanted to do my own version of them. I'm not too fond of letting characters break the fourth wall, but I wanted to make those partly BECAUSE of that.

And I'll take the fact that boinky hasn't added his "meh" yet as a compliment.

Keep up the good work, guys.

- Era

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Semi-non-funny, but not. Figure it out.

4-10-03 12:50pm (new)
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Devin
Comic Overlord

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No, YOU keep up the good work, punk!

Oh wait, that wasn't an insult. Sorry, I haven't taken my ritalin today.

4-10-03 1:20pm (new)
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Eradream
Stripcreator Newbie

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More like a reflex, I'll wager.

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Semi-non-funny, but not. Figure it out.

4-10-03 1:24pm (new)
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jes_lawson
I don't know what I'm doing either

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That last one was good, I liked that one. The comics I mean.

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Please replace the handset, and try again.

4-10-03 1:47pm (new)
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