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Nofear
Stripcreator Newbie

Hi, i'm new here. Read my damn comics please and tell me if there is anything just a little bit funny here.

4-14-03 2:52pm (new)
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TELEPHONE_COMICS
Stripcreator Newbie

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THOSE MADE ME LAUGH TIL I FEELL OFF THE HOOK! RING RING!

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RING RING! TIME FOR TELEPHONE COMICS!

4-14-03 3:17pm (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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Amateurish, but pretty good. All you need to do is refine your style (pay attention to spelling & grammar, know when to end a joke, stop relying on stock-art sight gags). Still, I laughed at more than one.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

4-14-03 3:49pm (new)
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Nofear
Stripcreator Newbie

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Ok thanks for the advice. Can you just tell me what "stock-art sight gags" means please, as I am new to this phrase. Thanks again.

4-14-03 4:19pm (new)
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Nofear
Stripcreator Newbie

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Ah shit i see what you mean not_Scyess. Ive fucking missed a "do" out of my Dave has issues strip and I can't change it:(

God I'm a twat sometimes

4-14-03 4:43pm (new)
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Doug
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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By "stock-art sight gags" he means you should die of cholera.

4-15-03 3:08am (new)
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TheSecretSociety
Junior Comic Technician

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Fairly decent stuff man. Not the best, but it's definately not the worst. I agree with not_Scyess with the fact that you should try to always keep punctuation marks in your sentences. Sometimes it can distract from your comics a bit if you choose to leave them out.

4-15-03 4:37pm (new)
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Nofear
Stripcreator Newbie

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Ok thanks for the feedback, this was my first atempt and i may donate so that i can go back and change them.

Thanks for the advice. Nofear

4-15-03 5:13pm (new)
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Doug
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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why the fuck haven't you died of cholera yet

4-15-03 5:28pm (new)
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andydougan
Film critic subordinaire

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"What's twisting that bitch's tit?" did it for me. Good work.

4-15-03 7:05pm (new)
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