SWF SEEKS CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM

EITHER THAT OR ICE CREAM CONES

(PLZ LOOK AT MY COMICS OR BUY ME ICE CREAM)

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I LIKE NATURE BECAUSE THAT'S WHERE PONIES LIVE

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

THX

COMMENTS ARE STILL APPRECIATED EVEN IN LIGHT OF DELICIOUS ICE CREAM

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I LIKE NATURE BECAUSE THAT'S WHERE PONIES LIVE

Dispite everything in my being urging to tell you otherwise, I thought your comics were pretty damned funny. The only suggestions I would give you is to cut out the narration boxes (which were only necessary once or twice out of the 30+ of them you used).

Normally I'd say to cut out the all-caps and add proper punctuation, but in your case I think it added a lot to your comics (TEDA-style).

Hooray for you. And you even got ice cream, too.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

HOW NICE

THANK YOU FOR YOUR INPUT. THE TEDA-STYLIN COMMENT MADE ME WIGGLE IN DELIGHT

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I LIKE NATURE BECAUSE THAT'S WHERE PONIES LIVE

Terrible.

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Mess with the best, die like the rest.

I have to agree with C0mplet0 on this one. Some of your comics were decent and slightly funny, but the others were all like a bad R rated movie. Try to use better punctuation, that might fair your comics quite a bit better. Also, the fact that it looks like your caps lock key became broken after your first comic is kind of a turn-off.

NO CAN DO SIR OR MADAM

IT IS KINDA MY SCHTICK YOU KNOW

BUT THX ANYWAY!!1 HAVE A FINE DAY LOLOLOL

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I LIKE NATURE BECAUSE THAT'S WHERE PONIES LIVE

I guess everyone does need a gimmick.

I love this one.

IS IT SO WRONG by Auntie 9-30-02

IN THE BUSINESS OF CROTCH RUBBING RUBBING MY CROTCH ON THIS AND THAT WHAT THE SHIT IS THIS WAIT FOR IT, WAIT FOR IT UNNNNGH UNF UNF UNF UNF UNF UNF UNF HOOOORK NO. IS IT ALL THAT WRONG TO SPOOGE ON A BETTER HOMES AND GARDENS MAGAZINE, BECAUSE REALLY DUDE WAS THAT A HAIKU

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I love this one.

IS IT SO WRONG by Auntie 9-30-02

IN THE BUSINESS OF CROTCH RUBBING RUBBING MY CROTCH ON THIS AND THAT WHAT THE SHIT IS THIS WAIT FOR IT, WAIT FOR IT UNNNNGH UNF UNF UNF UNF UNF UNF UNF HOOOORK NO. IS IT ALL THAT WRONG TO SPOOGE ON A BETTER HOMES AND GARDENS MAGAZINE, BECAUSE REALLY DUDE WAS THAT A HAIKU

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Eh. I don't get it.

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