Your second comic is pretty good. Just get rid of the unnecessary narration boxes and you'll be doing swell.
A side note -- does anyone know why the new kids always feel an urge to use too many narration boxes? Do they feel the characters don't convey enough of the story? Do they think they have to fill in all the fields? What? I don't get it.
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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002