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JudgeMeHarshX
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This is the only decent one that's been made in the past three days.

Soggy Satire by JudgeMeHarshX
7-05-03
Well, I'm back from the trip to the lake, Robot-Z.
Did you and the parents enjoy it?
It was all right, but I lost my car keys again.
You probably left them in the car again.
Maybe. I'm not diving to the bottom of the lake to get them, though.
I see your point.

7-08-03 6:24pm (new)
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andydougan
Film critic subordinaire

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That was quite good. But I don't think the robot should say "I see your point".

7-08-03 7:03pm (new)
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choadwarrior
Crash Magnet

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I agree with andydougan on both points.

7-08-03 8:24pm (new)
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Bargaintuan
Don't eat any wooden nickels.

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I see your point.

Also, two sentences ending in "again" in the second panel is kinda awkward. Keep 'em coming, though.

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Life is a lot like getting mugged; you get your kicks, you take your punches, and when it's over, someone else gets your cash.

7-08-03 9:08pm (new)
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JudgeMeHarshX
Stripcreator Newbie

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Hm...thanks for the insight, guys. I was going to keep the robot silent in the last panel, but I decided he needed to say something...because I'm a fool, you see. Heh.

Also, I have another decent one up:

The Cruelty of Organized Religion by JudgeMeHarshX
7-09-03
It's been raining a lot in Indianapolis these last few days.
Yeah, I saw that on TV. Kokomo is getting pounded.
You'd think three days of flooding and tornadoes would be enough on them.
Nah, sometimes dad likes to be an ass to poor people like that.

7-09-03 2:29am (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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The third panel could've been more eloquent, but overall it was a decent comic.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

7-09-03 1:29pm (new)
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Rabid_Weasle
Professional style cramper

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I'll just assume the last panel with him him putting a nail in his head was a screw-up...

So I'll say good comic.

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Poop.

7-09-03 7:10pm (new)
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JudgeMeHarshX
Stripcreator Newbie

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The nail in the head made sense to me at the time, but it was about five in the morning with no sleep for the past few days, so I can see how it was lost. I'm all rested up now...you're right, it doesn't make as much sense.

7-11-03 3:36am (new)
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