Partial credit. The idea of God looking like a crazy scientist is funnier than the idea of Jesus answering when someone takes his name in vain, not to mention somewhat more original. The comic could be improved with a different third panel, maybe one that builds on the previous two. Also, don't move the stickman around so much. For consistency's sake, he could have been on the right in at least the first two panels, or maybe the position of the characters in the second and third panels should have been reversed. Finally, the narration is superfluous; the cloud background and the invocation of God are sufficient to establish the setting -- not that the strip even needs to take place in heaven for the jokes to work.
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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!
