New at this, but having fun!

Won't cry if you criticize :-)

Your comics are pretty funny, but a lot of the narration seems unneccessery and obtrusive.

Not just overnarrated, but too wordy all around. I think your ideas are good, but you should try to deliver them more quickly and briefly.

Are you trying to say I talk too much!?!?!?!?
Did my husband pay you to say that? friggin #$%#$% talks more than anyone else..but says I talk to much!?!?! and now has random people on the net say the same thing! all so he can feel superior???

Just kidding..yeah you guys are right...it's a little wordy, I agree.

Maybe I will get to play some more tonight...my vacation is almost over...but I do feel the need to attack my line of work, not just my husbands lol.

Thanks for the input!!
~T