New at this, but having fun!

Won't cry if you criticize :-)

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Your comics are pretty funny, but a lot of the narration seems unneccessery and obtrusive.

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what happened to my rustic monologue? ...i'm not sleeping with that producer again

Not just overnarrated, but too wordy all around. I think your ideas are good, but you should try to deliver them more quickly and briefly.

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

Are you trying to say I talk too much!?!?!?!?
Did my husband pay you to say that? friggin #$%#$% talks more than anyone else..but says I talk to much!?!?! and now has random people on the net say the same thing! all so he can feel superior???

Just kidding..yeah you guys are right...it's a little wordy, I agree.

Maybe I will get to play some more tonight...my vacation is almost over...but I do feel the need to attack my line of work, not just my husbands lol.

Thanks for the input!!
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