The first one was a crime. They got better from there. Maybe work on your dialogue a bit, but I think you're off to a decent start. Welcome to Stripcreator.
--- The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!
you're not funny at all. sorry, but you're not. But this comic shows a little potential. [Click to view comic: 'Terminal']
keep trying and find your style of humor....or just give up, doesn't bother me.