Hello fellow Stripcreators, if you're looking for a good laugh at someone's somewhat true to life comics, check mines out... LoL... have fun!

... True to life? Anyway, don't use so many narration boxes.

Hmmm... thanks for the advice, and maybe... semi-true to life? =D

Well, i did think it was kind of funny how you referred to Hell as Down Under.

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Stop with the narration boxes. They tend to make comics stinky. Also, don't end sentences with ellipses...

It makes the comic feel too loose, in my opinion. Punchlines are better with a period at the end.

However, there is some funny stuff in there. I look forward to reading more of your comics.

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Sorry, I didn't mean Hell as down under... it had nothing to do with the South, or Australia or anything. LoL! Thanks for more advice!

Read Awards Shuffle 1-5 =D

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Also, don't end sentences with ellipses...

It makes the comic feel too loose, in my opinion. Punchlines are better with a period at the end.

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