Well, I made some comics about a month ago. Anyone care to comment about them? I tried to use things I thought was okay for my material. ^-^;;; I'm sure I'm going to get flamed. ^-^;; Oh, and I know I can't spell. Thanks in advance(?).

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~Lynne~

I like this one:

Being lonely and no one to talk to... by LynneKatrea 7-14-03

You know, I love you and I really miss you alot. Cardbord cut outs of my boyfriend is not good company...

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troelsea at gmail dot com

Thanks. :) My cuzzie liked that one too. :) I appreciate your feedback! :) Yay! ^-^

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~Lynne~

I like that one as well. The others are lacking... something. I dont want to sound rude or anything, but theyre simply not funny. Maybe adding punchlines, or straying away from the topic of your boyfriend would help.

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Mediocrity at its most average.

Thanks. I appreciate your opinion. I did the others as kinda a spur of the moment. I look back and say "I used that 'You suck.' joke too much.' Most of mine aren't with my boyfriend, though. They are with my sister and myself arguing.
No more inspiration there. My sis moved to live with my dad. I think that last Sisterly Love was the last one I'll be having, unless I get to see her again one day. ::Shrug.::
Oh, I got off topic.
Well, I have trouble with punchlines. My things just aren't really that funny, you know? I'll try again one day when I feel inspired.
Thanks :)
Bai bai.

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~Lynne~

First off, welcome aboard.

I think you've made a good start. Your early stuff is very 'boyfriend-happy' which is cool because there aren't many people writing about love on here, but I was curious about your takes on other things. The last couple of comics shows a move towards other things besides your boyfriend and that's a step in the right direction. Keep it up.

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Peeing sitting down is the gift you give yourself.

Aww, thank you! ^-^

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~Lynne~

Stick around, if you have more to say on life than your other half then we're very happy to have you. Good stuff.

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Please replace the handset, and try again.