I'm sorry. I hate to be negative but that was just awful. First of all, your English skills leave something to be desired, and even though I know you did that on purpose, it makes the whole idea seem stupider than it already is. Zombies are cliche, Dragonball Z is stupid to begin with, and tears of joy streamed down my face when I finished reading it. Be creative. Besides it was rushed and you tried to make it "cool". This is just sad, and to all those who read it, I share your pain.