I'm posting this in both "comic showoff" forums. I'd really just like to get as much feedback as possible. Are these entertaining to you? If so, why? If not, why?
I like making them, but I want you to like reading them. Let me know if I should take a different direction.
This particular comic was funny, however I'd lose the narration boxes. The last one, at least, is completely unnecessary, but I suppose you used it more for "balance"?