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Jeanster
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1-31-04 4:17pm (new)
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nicejohnson
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DUDE, these are funny for a n00b! I love the subtle humor. Awesome!

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1-31-04 4:59pm (new)
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xxausrottenxx
Sock of the walk

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they were prettay good id say

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1-31-04 7:50pm (new)
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graykane
as if i knew what i was talking about

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i like 'em, too, especially the alien one. but (to add some constructive criticism so you don't get away with nothing but strangers' lips suctioning your nether regions) the timing's still off. so, if you want to work on improving the humor, work on the timing. (of course, it's much easier to be a critic than a comic.)

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1-31-04 8:44pm (new)
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Jeanster
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Thank you kindly for the comments, folks.

Regarding "timing", I'm not sure what you mean by that. Could you please give me a few links to comic strips that show this type of timing in the humor so I can understand what you mean? I'd appreciate it. Thanks.

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1-31-04 8:51pm (new)
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NooniePuuBunny
Horny Female Tentacled Kaiju from Outer Space

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Way better than my early comics. Nice.

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1-31-04 9:01pm (new)
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Jeanster
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Thanks. I just finished enjoying the one you did on the Home Shopping Commercial Physics. Then I clicked on the dropdown menu and saw the list of others you did. Wow. I don't know if I'll ever be able to come up with enough ideas to write as many strips as you have, but we'll see what happens a few months from now.

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1-31-04 9:08pm (new)
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graykane
as if i knew what i was talking about

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for timing, see nicejohnson's passionate penguin:
http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/nicejohnson

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1-31-04 9:08pm (new)
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Jeanster
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Yep. That Passionate Penguin one is damn good. I'd rate it 5 stars out of 5.

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A good friend will come and bail you out of jail...but, a true friend will be sitting next to you saying, "Damn...that was fun!"

1-31-04 9:12pm (new)
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graykane
as if i knew what i was talking about

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the aliens and the gay cowboys exhibit the best timing because the last frame wasn't as predictable (although always viable) prior to its viewing. however, the merlin one had the baby as a likely answer to the joke from the start (the timing's off because the joke's punchline is answered early), and the lesbians one was set up too obviously in the second frame (the joke's punchline was answered in the second frame: timing's off). i hope that clarifies what i mean by "timing."

anyway, like i said, though, your comics are good. i'm just offering something constructive. keep up the good work.

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1-31-04 9:17pm (new)
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NooniePuuBunny
Horny Female Tentacled Kaiju from Outer Space

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Thats what your dropdown list will prolly look like in 4 months! After all, you are a better n00b than I!

You have to understand as well there's more dog poo than gold in my comics...especially the earlier ones.

You'll prolly make more gold if you take advice from a lot of the oldbies and read lotz of comics of others to get the feel of the site better. I stayed isolated for about 2 months on this site. That in combination with my own lack of writing skills (I mean writing plots) lead to so much bloodshed and doggie poo.

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1-31-04 9:20pm (new)
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Jeanster
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I did one more:

[Click to view comic: 'Maura and Pete']

Now I shall call it a night and turn in. Good night, folks. I'll check back here tomorrow to see what other entertaining comic strips you can create.

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1-31-04 11:17pm (new)
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Jeanster
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I thought it would be fun to do a series, so here's Part 1:

[Click to view comic: 'Geek Boy Seeks Love, Part 1']

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2-01-04 11:04am (new)
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Jeanster
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The story of Geek Boy seeking love continues:

[Click to view comic: 'Geek Boy Seeks Love, Part 2']

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2-01-04 11:29am (new)
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Jeanster
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[Click to view comic: 'Geek Boy Seeks Love, Part 3']

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A good friend will come and bail you out of jail...but, a true friend will be sitting next to you saying, "Damn...that was fun!"

2-01-04 11:47am (new)
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Jeanster
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[Click to view comic: 'Geek Boy Seeks Love, Part 4']

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A good friend will come and bail you out of jail...but, a true friend will be sitting next to you saying, "Damn...that was fun!"

2-01-04 12:09pm (new)
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Jeanster
Blackadderess

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[Click to view comic: 'Geek Boy Seeks Love, Part 5']

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A good friend will come and bail you out of jail...but, a true friend will be sitting next to you saying, "Damn...that was fun!"

2-01-04 12:39pm (new)
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Jeanster
Blackadderess

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[Click to view comic: 'Geek Boy Seeks Love, Part 6']

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A good friend will come and bail you out of jail...but, a true friend will be sitting next to you saying, "Damn...that was fun!"

2-01-04 1:29pm (new)
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Jeanster
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[Click to view comic: 'Geek Boy Seeks Love, Part 7']

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A good friend will come and bail you out of jail...but, a true friend will be sitting next to you saying, "Damn...that was fun!"

2-01-04 1:57pm (new)
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boinky33
I'm with stupid ^

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That seemed unnessecary.

2-01-04 2:14pm (new)
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Jeanster
Blackadderess

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[Click to view comic: 'Geek Boy Seeks Love, Part 8']

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A good friend will come and bail you out of jail...but, a true friend will be sitting next to you saying, "Damn...that was fun!"

2-01-04 2:56pm (new)
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Jeanster
Blackadderess

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[Click to view comic: 'Geek Boy Seeks Love, Part 9']

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A good friend will come and bail you out of jail...but, a true friend will be sitting next to you saying, "Damn...that was fun!"

2-01-04 4:29pm (new)
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nicejohnson
Stripcreator Regular

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Um dude....Where do I start? This is kind of like the movie Darkness Falls...Great ideas and plot but the acting and special effects screwed it up. Basically: Good idea for a series, good plot, bad punchlines. Work on that. There's no funny, really, but potential funniness. It's like you're holding back or something.

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2-01-04 4:40pm (new)
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Jeanster
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Thank you kindly, nicejohnson. Actually, since "Geek Boy Seeks Love" is becoming one of those "soap opera type" comic strips (like Rex Morgan, M.D., for example) as Geek Boy discovers his sexual orientation, there won't always be funny punchlines throughout the strips.

Good thing I don't plan to quit my day job, huh?

Gee, this is such a fun site! I've spent most of my day here on it, while hubby is away at a Super Bowl party.

Cheers!
~Jeanster

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2-01-04 4:59pm (new)
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Jeanster
Blackadderess

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[Click to view comic: 'Geek Boy Seeks Love, Part 10']

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2-01-04 5:42pm (new)
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